At Mekarsari at the old yucky stinky river. We went fishing.
I've got three fishes. It was very hard because the fish was moving around so fast but luckily I caught it it was a lucky day for me.
Although it was disgusting BLLLLLLLLLL!T_T
My friends is very good Aditya caught five fishes OMENNNN.
There are people from another school.
Aditya the lucky boy.
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Your score will be 10/10. Good that you have put your own work
I think your score should be 8/10 because you don't put the comma, in the right place. Also the post that you have put, doesn't have the right spelling.
10/10
10/10
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